Communicating with Both Hands Tied behind Our Backs by James R. Coggins

Experts tell us that when we speak to one another, 55% of our meaning is expressed by body language, 38% by the tone of our voice, and only 7% by the words. Which is why the lyrics don’t matter in rock songs.

So, what does that mean for us writers, who have only the words to communicate? Fortunately, we have developed some techniques to help make up for the lack of body language and tone of voice. We can SHOUT. We can emphasize some words. We can exclaim! Is it possible for us to also ask questions? And sometimes tone of voice can be communicated in other ways.

Handwritten letters can be printed in:

Humorous stories can be printed in a

Very serious ideas can be printed in a.

White space, —, *****, and … convey pauses. If necessary, we can even include photos, line drawings, maps, etc.

There is also an axiom among writers that we should “show, not tell.” Instead of saying that a character named Mary was angry, we say, “She slammed the door in his face” or “on his fingers.” Instead of saying that Peter was in danger, we say that “An eerie, moaning wind swept across the moors.”

Writers need to be highly skilled to communicate in their chosen medium. It is like dancing ballet in work boots, and only a very skilled writer can do it successfully.

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About jrcoggins

James R. Coggins is a professional writer and editor based in British Columbia, Canada. He wrote his first novel in high school, but, fortunately for his later reputation as a writer, it was never published. He briefly served as a Christian magazine editor (for just over 20 years). He has written everything from scholarly and encyclopedia articles to jokes in Reader’s Digest (the jokes paid better). His six and a half published books include four John Smyth murder mysteries and one other, stand-alone novel. In his spare time, he operates Mill Lake Books, a small publishing imprint. His website is www.coggins.ca
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